Tuesday, September 18, 2007

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The scene opens on a lake setting about mid morning. A father duck clad in fisherman attire carrying his pole comes walking up with his son. The approach the lake and sit to begin to fish. The son throws a rock in the lake splashing the dad causing a quick flashback of the dad not being able to swim and almost drowning in the lake. It cuts back to the scene at the lake where the father looks frazzled but shakes it off and starts to fish with his son. The son gets a nibble, and stands to reel it in, but is yanked into the middle of the lake by the fish, and the son beings to splash about having a hard time staying a float. The father jumps to his feet scared and runs along the shore, he tries to reach to his son but his son is obviously too far out, the father looks around and picks ups his pole and tries to reach it to his son but it too is short. He goes to cast the reel to get his son but notices the pointy hook and drops the rod. The father with no other options in sight, takes a deep breath and jumps into the lake to save his son. The father struggles but gets to his son just as his sons head falls under the water. He holds his son and then and sighs in relief as the scene zooms out on the father holding his son and swimming to the shore.

Monday, September 3, 2007

A father duck needs to overcome his fear of water, to save his son.

1. Father duck can be seen around the pond showing actions of being afraid of the water.

2. His Son Is out in the middle of the lake dancing around on a rock.

3. The son slips and falls into the water, and because hes so young starts flailing around

4. Father duck panics and finds something to throw to his son but it is not long enough to reach

5. the son can be seen struggling and goes under

6. the father panics more runs around, then bravens up and jumps in after his son.

7. the father realizes water isint so bad and can be seen teaching his son to swim.

Duck Out Of Water

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